Earthquake ( Movie script)
Earthquake ( A movie script)
This day was the happiest day for Rahul because today he got the prize for helping the poor people, and he was really happy. He had also one friend , he made this friend when he was helping poor people and he used to feel happy whenever he meet to his friend Sanju . Fortunately, he was going to meet to Sanju but when he appeared there he got shocked and he saw that everything was destroyed there , it was looking like as a construction area and his friend's house was also damaged and Sanju was also not there and in reality it was the major earthquake of level 9 . He asked to a lot people that where is Sanju his family who used to live in this home , one of them told him that now nobody is there in the world . Everybody has injured by it and they have died. He again got shocked and he was feeling regretting because if he would be there then he could save Sanju and his family .
He was very sad for a long day and he was in depression also, but after some days he realized that there is no benefit for sitting like this and he decided to do something because he was aware of it that this is not happend with my friend only , it has happened with lots of people and it can be happens in future with someone.
So he decided to do something for it and he started do the study of the earthquake and he got a lot of knowledge about earthquake. So he used to visit in local areas and he started give the information about earthquake and how can be prevented from it ? , how to identify earthquake? like this he started give the information. And he mostly used to visit in school and he started guide and give the information to students also and just because of this contribution , in India the cases of people who gets injury every year by earthquake has decreased.
So this was the great contribution from Rahul towards us and our country.
It's was very nice script, I really appreciate😊 to you🥰 for this but, in the last paragraph, I think you should write ''he decided to do something for it'' in place of '' he decided to go something for it''.
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DeleteQuite impressive 😄 script Amit , your speech is totally visualizable and it's plot was emotionally attachable as well😄😄😄 ... It just like , that I'm reading a real movie 🍿 script .☺️
ReplyDeleteWell , if I talk about your area of improvements then , there is not so much things you have to improve as you are already a native writer . But , I think you should work on your
Spelling errors as , there is a word which is spell incorrect i.e. aslo.
2) you are shifting your structure structure , a bit fast .. you can slow down it .
3) you can describe your emotional attachment , a little bit i.e. (looking like as a construction area because his friend's house was also damaged and Sanju was also not there and in reality it was the major earthquake of level 9 . He asked to a lot people that where is Sanju ) ; you can improve this by putting some emotions more .
Except this , your climax and ending should be some more inciting and detailed ..😊
Other than that , you have a great skill of writting ..
Keep it up dear .
Awesome movie script. I am also agree with Kaushal. All the parameters are present in the script. You can improve in resolution part for better ending.Keep it up.👍
ReplyDeleteIt was amazing movie script of earthquake. And I also agree with c.p sir and Kaushal. You should need work on your resolution part of story. I really appreciate to you for this movie script. Keep it up 👍.
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