Rare stone from Egypt ( A movie script)

 Rare stone from Egypt

This story is about 3 people 
1. One boy ( Arjun)
2. A great Saint 
3. Lord Krishna

Outline of the story

Arjun had frustrated with his life - he wanted too much money 💰 - he decided to do suicide, because he was unable to do anything - Arjun appeared near to the sea - he was about to Dive in the sea - suddenly
one great Saint  cames there - Saint got to know about everything of his life - Saint understood the problem of his life - he tells one mystery about lord Krishna to Arjun- he tells him about one rare stone which was from Egypt - that stone was really very expensive and mysterious- saint tells him about the area where he could found that rare stone- he says him that the stone is around the sea in these little stones - Saint gives him some hints to find it , that the stone will be little bit warmer than others stone- Arjun understood all the things - he sees Everything and he says yes ,I can do - he used to come everyday there - 4 months had passed by do this only- one day an incident happens there  -  just because of that incident ,he gets their solution of his problem from which he was frustrated in their life- he says thanks to saint..


 


Comments

  1. The sky is yours2 July 2021 at 21:36

    Really very interesting Amit ☺️☺️☺️.. just like a movie script . I must say that you improving yourself day by day with a good speed 🤠 . If I talk about , what I like in your script then , my answer is everything . Your script is really very Amazing and if it continues then , I would like to read more ... Your outline , your inciting incident , raising action everything is phenomenal ..
    And if I talk about your area of improvement then , you can work on climax (twist and turn , conflicts ) and denouement ( if it is some more explained then it is good ).
    Otherwise , just incredible ❤️ .
    Keep it up 🙂 bro .

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    1. Amit3 July 2021 at 02:32

      Thank you so much Kaushal for your valuable feedback !

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  2. Unknown3 July 2021 at 04:21

    Hey Amit, well done!
    I just want to share with you that
    Arjun had frustrated with his life.(Use was instead of had).
    he was about to Dive in the sea. (Avoid using capitalization in the middle of the sentence.)
    one great Saint cames there (There is no such word as cames...use 'came')
    Saint got to know about everything of his life (Sentence structure/framing- Saint got to know everything about his life.)
    saint tells him about the area where he could found that rare stone- he says him that the stone is around the sea in these little stones (Tenses- could find.) (said to him, 'to' is missing or use he told him.)
    Keep it up!

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